Although it would not be due to the cold (I'm in sunny southern California), this is a scence I see around the retirement community I live in now quite often. Delighted relief. :-) Very enjoyable haiga.
I see this is a haiga from the comment of rae. I have to investigate that form. I tried tanga and it is more difficult for me than haiku. I love this poem because it reminds me of when my father was alive and we would go for walks every day when he was able. And all the other people at the nursing home where he was, the people I fell in love with and miss seeing now. Those were the best of days.
Great moment captured in picture and words.
ReplyDeleteI agree with spacedlaw!
ReplyDeleteOne very beautiful moment!
laughter lines
exquisite... it says so much in so few words... wonderful photo...
ReplyDeleteGreat combination of picture and poetry.
ReplyDeleteWonderful feeling in this! I love it!
ReplyDeletePerfection!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful moment captured with picture and word.
ReplyDeleteYou have us all smiling here.
ReplyDeleteAlthough it would not be due to the cold (I'm in sunny southern California), this is a scence I see around the retirement community I live in now quite often. Delighted relief. :-) Very enjoyable haiga.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. I enjoy the lady's smile. :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful haiga. Going home after a long day is truly joyful.
ReplyDeleteTruly inspired.
ReplyDeleteThe perfect words for the wonderful photo.
ReplyDeleteSo descriptive, your words. It does bring joy to me seeing the picture and your words.
ReplyDeletebeautiful picture word combo. it made me smile.
ReplyDeleteI see this is a haiga from the comment of rae. I have to investigate that form. I tried tanga and it is more difficult for me than haiku. I love this poem because it reminds me of when my father was alive and we would go for walks every day when he was able. And all the other people at the nursing home where he was, the people I fell in love with and miss seeing now. Those were the best of days.
ReplyDeleteYou've really captured this moment! Great smile in the photo and the words are just right.
ReplyDeletechilled ... the thought of warmth
ReplyDeletemingled with the memories
of the day ... Hot tea?
Hugs and blessings,
simply beautiful... makes me cry..and smile... missin someone so dear... i guess im in a cryin mood today...
ReplyDeleteI love the way you played with the photo and included your haiku. Superb!
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