After I published pictures yesterday of the weekend's lunar eclipse, Lyn Moir sent me two pictures she'd taken in St Andrews, Fife.
She also sent me a copy of this poem. It is a slight reworking of an earlier poem about the 2001 eclipse which was first published in Poetry Scotland.
LUNAR ECLIPSE 2007
No wild coronas blazing in the dark,
no rings of fire, no diamonds in the sky,
your shadowing more subtle than the blind
black masking of your lover's face, no stark
annihilation of the light, you mark
this darkness with passivity, resigned
to loss of his reflection, dignify
your enforced mourning with consummate art
and summon up the spectrum, put on shades
of crimson, scarlet, purple, blue, a screen
to cloak your temporary widowhood;
you flaunt voluptuous contours as light fades,
gaining solidity, and with it seem
to change, to be the entity you should.
Lyn Moir
I wrote a haiku sequence at the time of the 2001 eclipse. It was translated into Romanian by Andrei Dorian Gheorghe and published by SARM (Romanian Society for Meteors and Astronomy)
ECLIPSE SEQUENCE by Gerald England SECVENTELE ECLIPSEI in romaneste de Andrei Dorian Gheorghe January 9th 2001 | |
bright full moon shines through thin cloud - a plane flies over | luminoasa luna plina straluce prin nor subtire- un avion zboara deasupra-i |
the shadow bites - level with big planets Capella shines | umbra musca nivel cu mari planete Capella straluceste |
four-fifths gone more stars appear Venus fades | patru-cinci duse mai multe stele apar Venus se ofileste |
from her sick-bed my wife watches the action on television | din patu-i de boala sotia mea priveste actiunea la televizor |
frosty night - deep red disc in Gemini | noapte inghetata disc rosu adanc in Gemenii |
light rays spread to Pollux and Castor - crescent emerges | raze de lumina se raspandesc spre Castor si Pollux- crescente rasarind |
half moon Procyon and Sirius twinkle low | luna jumatate Procyon si Sirius licaresc incet |
small shadow left the biting wind sends me indoors | mica umbra scade vantul muscator ma trimite inauntru |
the whole moon south in winter sky - curtains close | luna intreaga sud in cer de iarna- cortinele se trag |
I enjoyed your haiku sequence - especially the line 'the shadow bites'. It looks nice in Romanian too, not a language I speak but it fascinates me....
ReplyDeleteI saw your comment re my lunar eclipse Miami photo blog and visited yours. I took my photo using a Canon G5 and did not touch my small telescope. I used to run a Rotary fellowship on astronomy and we had a lot of great discussions then. I also saw your link to Craig England. I have a 25 year old DS son living with us (my wife and I) in Miami. These are great kids. I hope to visit your blogs periodically. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteLan
I'm just back from your post dated 31 January... 5 things about you, one is NOT true.
ReplyDeleteIt's got to be number five. Or else I want it NOW!!!!
Cheers
Nathalie
Sydney Daily Snap
Under bloody moon
ReplyDeleteImagination flows
The muse awakens