Simple and strong. It reads almost like a loop - where you could juggle the terms balance and timing and still retain the meaning. Sort of like a dance in words.
very nice haiku. i like the way the line 'on balance' gives a suggested stop to the flow, and thus leaves the reader off balance for just a moment, until the rest of the haiku brings it back together.
Nice one!
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Fun! And so true. Life in general is all about timing. :-)
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I like your haiku and I love her outfit in the photo!
what a delightful combination!!!!
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Simple and strong. It reads almost like a loop - where you could juggle the terms balance and timing and still retain the meaning. Sort of like a dance in words.
ReplyDeleteAnd so does your haiku!
ReplyDeletevery nice haiku. i like the way the line 'on balance' gives a suggested stop to the flow, and thus leaves the reader off balance for just a moment, until the rest of the haiku brings it back together.
ReplyDeleteVery fun piece!
ReplyDeleteYou got it! That's the whole thing - timing.
ReplyDeletegreggo wrote exactly what came to my mind...the is the perfect match of picture & word!
ReplyDeleteVery enjoyable. It brings both a smile to my face and an "aha" to my mind.
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