Sunday, October 05, 2008

Serendipity


autumn pleasures
the rusting roller-coaster
remains behind

© 2008, gerald england

Posted in response to the "serendipity" prompt at One Single Impression.

13 comments:

  1. Fabulous. Even more so when I thought the white wall in the foreground was gravestones.

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  2. A good sense of change in this. I liked it.

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  3. Interesting use of the prompt, with the combination of seasons. Clever!

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  4. This reminds me of an amusement park where I grew up in a very small town in New England. It is seasonal - only open 2 months out of the year.
    For most of the yer we were left to see the memories of what was and the promises of what is yet to be.

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  5. This evoked an instant memory of the past. Wonderful haiku.

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  6. You've created a vivid picture and evoked melancholy feelings with just a few words.

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  7. I like the realness of this piece.
    Thanks so much!
    Beth

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  8. Your words are wonderfully visual - speak of the photo!

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  9. The gods of autumn have tempted you away from summer pleasures I see! An interesting way to look at serendipity!

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